Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，但“in the age of junior school”表达不自然，而且谈过去的经历应使用过去时“had”，而不是“have”。可以直接说明你小时候是否有自行车，再补充一个具体细节，例如何时骑车或通常在哪里骑。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was in primary school. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: 先直接回答问题，并用复数“bikes”或“cycling”表达自行车很受欢迎。“because I can sing”与问题无关，建议改为说明自行车受欢迎的原因，例如方便、便宜或环保。“Many people will buy a bike”不够具体，也不自然地表达了普遍现象；可以改为“many people use bikes”并补充相关场景。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. They are affordable and convenient for short journeys, so many people use them to commute or run errands.

× Yes, in the age of junior school, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, when I was in junior school, I had a bike.

“in the age of junior school”不是自然、正确的表达。可以说“when I was in junior school”（我上初中时）。

× Yes, in the age of junior school, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, when I was in junior school, I had a bike.

问题问的是小时候是否有自行车，指过去的经历，因此应将现在时“have”改为过去式“had”。回答过去发生的事情时，要使用一般过去时。

× Yes, I think bike is very popular in my country because I can sing.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because I can sing.

这里泛指自行车这一类事物，应使用复数“bikes”，并将与之搭配的“is”改为“are”。泛指可数名词时，通常使用复数形式。

× Many people will buy a bike.

✓ Many people buy bikes.

这里是在说明自行车目前是否受欢迎，表达一般情况应使用一般现在时“buy”，而不是表示将来行为的“will buy”。泛指人们通常会做的事时，可使用一般现在时。