Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer in the past tense because the question asks about your childhood. Give a direct response, then add one specific detail, such as how you used the bike or who gave it to you. Keep the answer concise.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood after school.

提案: Your main point is clear, but avoid repeating the same idea and remove fillers such as “uh.” Use “people” rather than “peoples,” and say “bikes” or “a bike” instead of “bike” when speaking generally. Organize the answer with a clear reason and a specific example.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short trips. They’re convenient and help people avoid traffic, so many commuters use them to get to work or nearby shops.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about a past period, when you were a child, so use the past-tense form had rather than the present-tense form have.

× Most peoples use bike for their local uh for their regular travels and it is quite convenient and it is uh as there is a lot of traffic in my country and most peoples travel by bike

✓ Most people use bikes for regular trips, and they are quite convenient. There is a lot of traffic in my country, so most people travel by bike.

People is already the plural form of person, so peoples is incorrect in this context. Use people both times. Also, bikes is plural here because the sentence refers to bikes generally.

× Most peoples use bike for their local uh for their regular travels and it is quite convenient and it is uh as there is a lot of traffic in my country and most peoples travel by bike

✓ Most people use bikes for regular trips, and they are quite convenient. There is a lot of traffic in my country, so most people travel by bike.

Bike is a singular countable noun and normally needs an article or another determiner. To make a general statement, use the plural bikes, as in use bikes.