Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答方向是相关的，但后两句语法和表达不清楚。建议先直接回答“有”，再用过去时说明你喜欢骑车，并具体补充骑车的地点或同伴。注意使用“enjoyed riding”而不是“enjoying take”，并把地点表达为“to the park”。

例: Yes, I did. I enjoyed riding my bike when I was a child. I often rode to the park with my friends.

提案: 回答直接，也给出了环保和健身两个理由。注意“bike”应改为复数“bikes”；后文可用“They”指代自行车，避免单复数不一致。还可以补充一个具体例子，让回答更充实。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. They’re environmentally friendly and help people keep fit. For example, many people ride them to work or school when the distance is short.

× An outgoing person I enjoying take bike. To park to Rd. with my friend.

✓ As an outgoing person, I enjoyed riding my bike to the park with my friend.

题目问的是你小时候的经历，应使用过去时。原句中的“I enjoying”没有使用过去时；可以改为“I enjoyed”。

× An outgoing person I enjoying take bike. To park to Rd. with my friend.

✓ As an outgoing person, I enjoyed riding my bike to the park with my friend.

动词“enjoy”后面应接动名词（动词-ing形式），不能直接接动词原形“take”。这里可说“enjoyed riding my bike”。

× To park to Rd. with my friend.

✓ I enjoyed riding my bike to the park with my friend.

原句只有“To park ... with my friend”这一介词短语，没有主语和谓语动词，因此是句子片段。应将它并入完整句子，补出主语和谓语。

× Yes, I think bike are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

这里说的是自行车这一类事物，且谓语使用了复数形式“are”，所以名词也应使用复数“bikes”，不能用单数“bike”。