Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，再补充一个具体细节。注意谈论童年经历时使用过去时；“when I have the child”表达不自然，应说“when I was a child”。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a little red one, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood.

提案: 回答内容需要更清楚，并且问题问的是整个国家，不宜只用家乡情况作为依据。说明自行车是否流行，并补充具体原因；注意使用自然、准确的表达，避免“my hometown, it is...”这样的重复结构。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. They are affordable and convenient for short trips, although many people in large cities prefer public transport.

× Yes, when I have the child, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I had a bike.

这句话描述的是童年时的经历，应使用过去时。这里应将 “have” 改为 “was”，将 “have a bike” 改为 “had a bike”。另外，表达“当我还是个孩子时”应说 “when I was a child”，而不是 “when I have the child”。

× No, I don't think so because my hometown, it is so out late.

✓ No, I don't think so because my hometown is so out late.

“my hometown” 已经是从句的主语，后面再加 “it” 会造成主语重复。删去 “it”，并让 “my hometown” 直接连接谓语。注意：“out late” 作为对家乡的描述不太自然；如果你想表达家乡很偏远，可以说 “remote”。