Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then add one or two specific details. Use the past tense consistently: say “liked riding” or “enjoyed riding,” not “like to like ride.” Avoid repeating the same idea about cycling being a hobby.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, and I loved riding it with my father and younger sister. We often went for rides together at the weekend, which became a fun family activity.

提案: State your opinion clearly and support it with a specific reason or example. Use natural phrases such as “cyclists are rarely seen” and “bicycles aren’t very popular.” Avoid the unclear phrase “rare happy,” and check subject–verb agreement and plural forms.

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, especially among university students. There are relatively few cycle lanes, so many students find it more convenient to use public transport or ride motorbikes.

× I really like the two ride a bike when I was young, especially with my father and younger sister.

✓ I really liked riding a bike when I was young, especially with my father and younger sister.

The phrase when I was young refers to a finished period in the past, so like should be in the past tense: liked.

× I really like the two ride a bike when I was young, especially with my father and younger sister.

✓ I really liked riding a bike when I was young, especially with my father and younger sister.

The phrase the two does not fit the sentence structure here. Use liked riding or liked to ride to express enjoyment of the activity.

× My father and sister also really liked to like ride a bicycle.

✓ My father and sister also really liked riding bicycles.

The sequence to like ride is not a correct verb construction in this sentence. After liked, use a gerund such as riding, or use the infinitive to ride. Remove the unnecessary like.

× Bike is I guess it is very rare happy among young people, especially the student in the university.

✓ Biking is, I guess, very uncommon among young people, especially university students.

The original sentence contains a broken structure: Bike is is followed by a second subject and verb, and rare happy does not form a grammatical phrase. Use one clear subject and verb, and use an adjective such as uncommon to describe how popular biking is.

× Bike is I guess it is very rare happy among young people, especially the student in the university.

✓ Biking is, I guess, very uncommon among young people, especially university students.

The sentence refers to students as a general group, so use the plural form students rather than the singular student.