Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответьте прямо и исправьте грамматику: используйте “I had” вместо “I has”, “teach me” вместо “learn me” и “how to ride it” вместо “how I should to use this thing”. Уберите паузы и повторения; добавьте конкретную деталь, например, где стоял велосипед или почему вы не научились кататься.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I never learned how to ride it. My parents didn’t teach me, so it mostly stayed in the garage.

提案: Сразу ответьте на вопрос о популярности велосипедов в стране. Исправьте выражения: “I have lived in Ukraine” неуместно здесь, если вы говорите о своей стране; вместо “this is was” используйте “they are” или “they were”, а вместо “uses the most of people” — “many people use them”. Уточните, где и почему люди ездят на велосипедах.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Ukraine, especially in smaller towns and in the countryside. Many people use them for short trips because they’re convenient and inexpensive.

× I has a bike when I was a child

✓ I had a bike when I was a child

Use had, the past-tense form of have, because the sentence describes a situation in childhood.

× I can't ride the bike

✓ I couldn't ride the bike

Use couldn't rather than can't because the inability is described in the past.

× my parents don't learn me

✓ my parents didn't learn me

Use didn't to keep the verb phrase in the past, matching the childhood context. The word learn is not the usual verb for this meaning; teach would be more natural, but that word-choice issue is not included in the provided problem-type list.

× how I should to use this thing

✓ how I should use this thing

A modal verb such as should is followed by the base form of a verb without to. Use should use, not should to use.

× this is was most popular transport

✓ this was the most popular transport

This is was combines two forms of be incorrectly. Use the past-tense form was. The added the is needed before the superlative; the article correction is listed separately.

× most popular transport

✓ the most popular transport

Use the before a superlative adjective phrase, such as the most popular.

× transport which uses the most of people

✓ transport which is used by most people

People use the transport, so the transport receives the action. Use the passive form is used, followed by by to identify the people performing the action.

× the most of people

✓ most people

Use most directly before a plural noun when referring to the majority of people. Most of requires a determiner, as in most of the people.