Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сразу ответьте в прошедшем времени: «Yes, I did». Используйте правильные формы и артикли: «when I was a child», «I had a favourite bike». Вместо неясного «three circles» скажите «a tricycle» или «a bike with three wheels». Уберите повторы и заполнители пауз; добавьте одну конкретную деталь, например, где вы катались.

例: Yes, I did. I had a little red tricycle when I was a child, and it was my favourite toy. I loved riding it around the park near my home.

提案: Начните с прямого ответа: «Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country». Используйте множественное число и подходящие конструкции: «a popular means of transport», «many children have bicycles». Объясните, где и почему велосипеды распространены; можно сравнить сельскую местность с городами. Избегайте незаконченных фраз и повторов, например «every… almost every».

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas. Many children have bicycles, and people often use them to travel short distances. They are affordable and convenient, although traffic can make cycling less comfortable in big cities.

× I have ... when I was child, I have ...

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child, I had...

The question asks about a past situation, so use the past-tense form had rather than have. The auxiliary did is also appropriate for a short answer to a past-tense question.

× when I was child

✓ when I was a child

Child is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a when referring to one child in this general way.

× one my favorite bike

✓ one of my favorite bikes

The phrase one of is used before a plural noun to identify one member of a group. Use bikes, not bike, after one of.

× He was was three uh circles

✓ It had three wheels.

A bike is an object, so refer to it with it rather than he. The corrected sentence also expresses the likely meaning using a natural construction.

× really love it

✓ I really loved it.

The student is describing a childhood experience, so the past-tense form loved is needed. Include the subject I to make the sentence complete.

× a bike is quite popular transport

✓ Bikes are quite a popular form of transport

The singular countable noun form needs an article, and the natural expression is a popular form of transport. Bikes is plural here to refer to bicycles in general.

× almost every child was bicycle

✓ you can see almost every child riding a bicycle

This describes a general situation, so was is not appropriate. The construction see someone doing something uses the present participle riding, and bicycle needs an article.

× in rural area

✓ in rural areas

The sentence refers to rural areas generally, so use the plural noun areas. For one specific area, use an article, as in in a rural area.