Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then add one specific detail. Correct the verb forms: use “had” for a past possession, “was” with “I,” and “loved riding” to describe a past habit. “Ride a bike” is more natural than “ride on the bike” here.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it around my neighborhood, especially on weekends.

提案: Your answer is unfinished, so complete the thought with a reason or example. Use the plural “bikes” with “are,” and avoid filler words such as “uh.” Give a clear opinion and one specific supporting detail, such as how people use bikes.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people use them to commute short distances because they are affordable and convenient. You can also see families cycling in parks at the weekends.

× Yes, I has a bike when I were a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence refers to the past, so use the past-tense verb had instead of has and was instead of were with the subject I.

× I love ride on the bike always.

✓ I always loved riding my bike.

After love, use a gerund ending in -ing when describing an activity. Use riding, not ride. Riding my bike is also a natural way to express this activity.

× I love ride on the bike always.

✓ I always loved riding my bike.

The speaker is describing childhood, so the past-tense form loved is more appropriate than the present-tense form love.

× Yep, I think uh bike are popular in my country.

✓ Yep, I think bikes are popular in my country.

The sentence refers to bikes in general, so use the plural noun bikes. The plural noun agrees with are.