Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答，再用一两句解释原因。注意可数名词单数前要加冠词，例如“a bike”；过去的经历应使用过去时，如“my parents thought”。回答中“fa”和“work to school”不清楚，建议改成完整、明确的表达，例如“walked to school”，并减少停顿词。

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought I was too young to ride one. I usually walked to school instead.

提案: 回答切题，也给出了“方便”和“有助于健康”两个理由。请使用复数“bikes”，并避免重复表达“我觉得很好”；可以补充一个具体用途，让内容更自然。减少“uh”等停顿词，并用“also”或“for example”连接补充信息。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re convenient and help people stay healthy. For example, many people ride them to work or to nearby shops.

× No, I didn't have bike because my fa parents think um I'm too young so I usually go to school work to school yeah

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because my parents thought I was too young, so I usually walked to school.

可数名词单数 bike 前需要冠词，因此应说 a bike。

× No, I didn't have bike because my fa parents think um I'm too young so I usually go to school work to school yeah

✓ No, I didn't have a bike because my parents thought I was too young, so I usually walked to school.

问题询问的是童年时期的情况，因此描述父母当时的想法和当时通常上学的方式时，应使用过去时：think 改为 thought，am 改为 was，go 改为 walked。

× Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because com bike is so uh convenient and can help people keep healthy so I think it's so good

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because a bike is so convenient and can help people keep healthy, so I think it's so good.

bike 是可数名词单数，泛指一辆自行车时需要在前面加不定冠词 a。

× Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because com bike is so uh convenient and can help people keep healthy so I think it's so good

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are popular in my country because a bike is so convenient and can help people keep healthy. I think it's so good.

because 已经引导原因从句时，通常不再用 so 引出同一个结果句。可以删去 so，或删去 because 并调整句子结构。