Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: This is a clear, natural answer with a direct response and specific details about the bike and when you rode it. To make it slightly more engaging, add a brief detail about how you felt or what you enjoyed doing on it. The answer is already concise and well organized.

例: Yes, I did. I used my mother’s small white bike and rode it around our neighborhood every afternoon. I especially enjoyed exploring the nearby streets with my friends.

提案: Answer directly, then explain that bikes are popular because they are affordable or widely produced. Avoid repeating “in my country” and using “so” several times. Use the natural phrase “a large bicycle-manufacturing industry” rather than “a big manufacture about bike.” Complete your final idea with a specific example or consequence.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. We have a large bicycle-manufacturing industry, so bikes are relatively affordable. As a result, many parents buy them for their children to ride to school or around the neighborhood.

× Of course, it is popular in my country because in my country they have a big manufacture about bike.

✓ Of course, they are popular in my country because people in my country have a big manufacture about bike.

The pronoun it is singular, but it refers to bikes, which is plural. Use they and the plural verb are to agree with bikes.

× Of course, it is popular in my country because in my country they have a big manufacture about bike.

✓ Of course, it is popular in my country because in my country they have a big manufacture about bikes.

Bike is used to refer to bikes in general, so the plural form bikes is needed here. Use a bike when referring to one specific bike.