Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer with a complete sentence rather than only “Uh-huh.” Add one relevant detail, such as when you got the bike, how often you rode it, or where you rode it.

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: Answer the question about bikes directly; your answer mentions bags instead. Use the plural “bikes,” and give a specific reason or example. Also, say “I live in a village” rather than “I'm living in village.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in rural areas. Many people use them to travel short distances because they are affordable and easy to park.

× Yes, in my country bag is very popular because I'm living in village so everybody needs bags.

✓ Yes, in my country, bags are very popular because I’m living in a village, so everybody needs bags.

The general noun bag should be plural when referring to bags as a category. Change bag is to bags are to maintain number agreement. The word village also needs an article; use a before the singular countable noun village.

× Yes, in my country bag is very popular because I'm living in village so everybody needs bags.

✓ Yes, in my country, bags are very popular because I’m living in a village, so everybody needs bags.

Village is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article. Use a village. Remember that singular countable nouns generally require an article or another determiner.