Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答没有回应“小时候是否有自行车”，而且“I don't know you mean”语法不正确。先直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，再补充一条具体信息，例如什么时候骑、和谁一起骑，或为什么没有自行车。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 你尝试表达否定观点，但“I don't think”后缺少必要的内容，“Bike encountering is not clever chance”也难以理解。可以用“No, I don’t think so”直接回答，并说明自行车是否普及的原因；使用清楚、相关的词语，例如“cycling is inconvenient”或“there aren’t many bike lanes”。

例: No, I don’t think so. In my area, cycling isn’t very common because the roads are busy and there aren’t many bike lanes.

× I don't know you mean.

✓ I don't know what you mean.

“I don't know”后面需要接一个完整的宾语从句。这里缺少表示“你所说的内容”的连接代词“what”，因此应说“I don't know what you mean.”

× Bike encountering is not clever chance.

✓ Bike riding is not a popular choice.

“clever”表示“聪明的”，不适合描述自行车是否受欢迎。根据问题语境，可用“popular”（受欢迎的）。建议根据想表达的含义选择恰当的形容词。

× Bike encountering is not clever chance.

✓ Bike riding is not a popular choice.

“choice”是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词；这里应使用“a”。建议单数可数名词前检查是否需要加“a”或“the”。