Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车，并统一使用过去时，例如“ I had” 和 “I rode”。“black backyard”意思不清，建议改成清楚的描述，如“a black bike”。可以删去“you know”等填充语，并把回忆和感受用一个具体细节连接起来。

例: Yes, I did. I had a black bike, and I often rode it with my friends after school. We used to race around the neighborhood, so those rides are still a happy childhood memory.

提案: 先明确回答自行车现在是否受欢迎。注意用“bikes”而不是“bags”，并避免重复“our country, in my country”。回答中“nowadays”后没有完整内容，需要补充今昔变化；可用“because”说明原因，再用“but these days”引出对比。尽量减少停顿词，让回答完整且不超过五句。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. In the past, many young people rode them because cycling was a healthy and affordable way to get around. These days, people still use bikes, although some prefer electric bikes for longer journeys.

× Actually, I have a bike.

✓ Actually, I had a bike.

问题问的是小时候有没有自行车，因此应使用过去时。把“have”改为“had”，与问题中的过去时间“when you were a child”保持一致。

× When I was a child, I remember that it's a black backyard.

✓ When I was a child, I remember that it was a black backyard.

这里描述的是小时候的情况，“it”所指的事物应使用过去时“was”，而不是“is”。“remember”可以保留现在时，因为它描述的是现在仍然记得这件事。

× I enjoy it.

✓ I enjoyed it.

这句话承接“小时候”的经历，描述过去的感受，因此应将“enjoy”改为过去式“enjoyed”。

× So, you know, after school I usually ride a bike with my friends and that's really memorable.

✓ So, you know, after school I usually rode a bike with my friends, and that was really memorable.

句子描述的是小时候放学后的习惯和回忆，应使用过去时：“ride”改为“rode”，“is”改为“was”。“usually”表示过去经常发生的动作，并不妨碍使用过去时。

× Well, in the past, MMM, uh, bags are popular in our country, in my country, and some young people like to ride the bike because they think it's good for their health.

✓ Well, in the past, MMM, uh, bags were popular in our country, in my country, and some young people like to ride the bike because they think it's good for their health.

“in the past”明确表示过去，因此描述当时的流行情况时，应把“are”改为过去式“were”。后半句没有明确说明是过去的年轻人，故不据此改动其中的现在时。