Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充父母买车、教你骑车等具体信息。注意时态：过去发生的事用“bought”；“骑自行车”是“ride a bike”，不是“write it”；“ran very quickly”与骑车的语境不符，可以改为描述骑车很快或很开心。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was about six, and they taught me how to ride it. I remember feeling really excited when I could ride around the neighborhood on my own.

提案: 回答应明确说明自行车在你所在国家是否流行。你提到的“automatic”含义不清，可能是指汽车；如果要对比汽车和自行车，请明确说明。注意“people”本身是复数，不加“s”；“conveniently”应改为形容词“convenient”；“to the company”可能想表达“通勤（to commute）”。补充一两个具体原因即可，例如短途出行方便、环保或有助于锻炼。

例: Yes, bikes are still popular in my country, especially for short trips. They’re convenient and inexpensive, and people can avoid traffic and get some exercise. However, many families prefer cars when they need to take their children to school.

× Yes, my parents book a bike for me when I was a little child.

✓ Yes, my parents booked a bike for me when I was a little child.

句子描述的是童年时发生的事情，且从句使用了过去时“was”，因此主句中的“book”也应使用过去式“booked”。

× Now currently most of peoples would like to buy the automatic because it's conveniently and quickly to the company and they can send their children to the school.

✓ Now, most people would like to buy the automatic because it's convenient and quick for getting to work, and they can send their children to school.

“most”后直接接复数名词时应说“most people”；如果使用“most of”，后面通常要接限定词，例如“most of the people”。另外，“people”本身是复数形式，不应写成“peoples”（除非指不同民族）。

× Now currently most of peoples would like to buy the automatic because it's conveniently and quickly to the company and they can send their children to the school.

✓ Now, most people would like to buy the automatic because it's convenient and quick for getting to work, and they can send their children to school.

“it's”后面需要用形容词作表语，所以应使用“convenient”和“quick”，而不是副词“conveniently”和“quickly”。描述通勤时可说“convenient and quick for getting to work”。

× Now currently most of peoples would like to buy the automatic because it's conveniently and quickly to the company and they can send their children to the school.

✓ Now, most people would like to buy the automatic because it's convenient and quick for getting to work, and they can send their children to school.

泛指孩子去上学这一活动时，固定表达是“go/send someone to school”，通常不加定冠词“the”。若特指某一所学校，才使用“the school”。