Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then explain who bought the bike and what your cousin taught you. Use the past tense consistently, and avoid repeating or restarting phrases. Keep your answer to a few complete sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was seven. My father bought it for me, and my cousin taught me how to ride it. He visited us every summer, so we often rode together.

提案: State your view clearly and support it with a specific reason. Avoid repeating words such as “very big,” and complete your final thought rather than ending with “so also we.” Use linking words to connect city size and traffic with your explanation.

例: Bikes are not very popular in Turkey, especially in large cities. Many people prefer cars or motorcycles because the distances can be long and the roads are often crowded. However, cycling may be more common in smaller towns or for recreation.

× I bought my father bought actually the first bike ba uh first bike for me.

✓ Actually, my father bought the first bike for me.

The utterance contains a false start and two competing subject-verb clauses, which makes the sentence structure unclear. Use one complete clause with a clear subject and verb. Based on the intended meaning, my father is the person who bought the bike.

× My cousin every summer have had been had came to our house and he taught me to buy.

✓ My cousin came to our house every summer, and he taught me to buy.

The speaker is describing a repeated event in the past, so the simple past came is appropriate. The sequence have had been had came mixes auxiliary verbs and an incorrectly formed verb. Use one past-tense verb for the event. Taught is already correctly in the past tense.

× So I am living in Turkey.

✓ So I live in Turkey.

The speaker is stating their usual place of residence, so the simple present live is more appropriate than the present progressive am living. Use the present progressive for a temporary situation or an action in progress.