Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，但两句话表达了同一意思，显得重复。可以补充一个具体细节，例如家人为什么没有给你买自行车，或者你小时候通常怎样出行，让回答更自然、更完整。

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. My family lived close to school, so I usually walked there with my parents.

提案: 回答表达了观点和理由，但“mmm”和“So no”会影响流畅度，而且“a transport tool for us to go anywhere”不够自然，也没有清楚说明为什么自行车不受欢迎。建议先直接回答，再具体解释人们更常选择的交通方式或原因，并使用“because”或“for example”等连接表达。

例: I wouldn't say bikes are very popular in my country. Many people prefer cars or public transport, especially when they have to travel long distances or commute in bad weather.

× No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because mmm it is just a transport tool for us to go anywhere.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because they are just a means of transportation for us to get around.

前面提到的主语是复数“bikes”，后面用单数代词“it”指代，代词与所指对象不一致。应使用复数代词“they”。此外，“a means of transportation”是表达“交通工具／交通方式”更自然的说法。