Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，再说明骑车带来的具体好处。注意语法：用“I was”，不要说“is can”；“锻炼身体”可表达为“get some exercise”。避免重复，并用自然、清晰的句子表达想法。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood after school, which was a fun way to get some exercise and improve my mood.

提案: 回答应聚焦于“现在自行车在你们国家是否流行”，而不是只讲童年经历。可以先给出明确判断，再用观察或例子解释；注意避免重复“didn't ride”，并将过去的“我”改为“I was the only one”。

例: I think bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in smaller cities. When I was a child, though, most of my friends didn’t ride them very often, so I was usually the only one in my group who did.

× I were a child

✓ I was a child

语法问题类型：过去时错误（ID 5）。这里说的是过去的童年经历，主语是“I”时，be动词的过去式应使用“was”，不能用“were”。

× riding a bike is can can exercise my body

✓ riding a bike can exercise my body

语法问题类型：情态动词用法错误（ID 4）。情态动词“can”后面应直接接动词原形“exercise”，不能在“can”前加“is”。重复的“can”也应删除。

× my spirit and mood makes me a better person

✓ my spirit and mood make me a better person

语法问题类型：主谓一致错误（ID 27）。“my spirit and mood”由“and”连接，是复数主语，因此谓语动词应使用“make”，不能使用第三人称单数形式“makes”。

× I am the only one

✓ I was the only one

语法问题类型：过去时错误（ID 5）。这里是在描述童年时的情况，因此应使用过去式“was”，与上下文中的“when I was a child”保持时态一致。