Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，但时态和表达不够自然。描述从小学一年级开始拥有、并持续到现在的自行车，建议用“have had ... since ...”；也可以说“when I was in first grade”。补充一个具体用途，让回答更完整。

例: Yes, I’ve had a bike since I was in first grade. I used to ride it to school and around my neighbourhood.

提案: 先直接回答，再用一两个具体理由展开即可。注意语法：用“there are many people who...”，而不是“there's many people have”；泛指时用复数“bikes”；“短途旅行”可表达为“short journeys”。描述普遍习惯时，用一般现在时“people use bikes”更自然。避免重复提到“my country”。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China. Many people learn to ride them as children, and they’re still a convenient way to get around. For short journeys, people often choose a bike instead of a car.

× Yes, I have got a bike since I was in grade one in my primary school.

✓ Yes, I've had a bike since I was in first grade.

表示从过去某个时间开始一直拥有自行车，应使用现在完成时“have had”。“have got”通常表示现在拥有某物，不适合与“since I was...”这样表示持续时间的结构搭配。

× In my country there's many people have had bike since they were a child, including me.

✓ In my country, there are many people who have had bikes since childhood, including me.

“many people”是复数，因此应使用“there are”，不能用“there's”（there is）。建议根据“there be”后名词的单复数选择正确的be动词。

× In my country there's many people have had bike since they were a child, including me.

✓ In my country, there are many people who have had bikes since childhood, including me.

“many people”后面直接接“have had”使句子结构不完整。需要用关系代词“who”引导定语从句，说明这些人有过自行车。

× In my country there's many people have had bike since they were a child, including me.

✓ In my country, there are many people who have had bikes since childhood, including me.

这里是在泛指许多人拥有过的自行车，使用复数“bikes”更合适。注意可数名词在表示泛指或数量不止一个时通常要使用复数形式。

× And many times when we need to travel in short journey we will use bike.

✓ And when we need to travel for short journeys, we use bikes.

表达“短途出行”时应说“for short journeys”，而不是“in short journey”。可以记住搭配“travel for a short journey”或“go on a short journey”。

× And many times when we need to travel in short journey we will use bike.

✓ And when we need to travel for short journeys, we use bikes.

“journey”和“bike”都是可数名词，单数形式通常不能单独使用。这里用复数“journeys”和“bikes”来泛指短途出行和自行车，避免遗漏冠词。