Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，再补充是谁送的、是什么时候收到的，以及为什么对你有意义。注意时态和动词形式：讲过去应说“my mother gave me”，生日礼物可说“a birthday present”；“ride bike”前要加冠词或改为复数“ride a bike / ride bikes”。“I think I remembered”不自然，可直接说“I remember”。结尾“Yeah”略显多余，可删去。

例: Yes, I did. I remember that my mother gave me a bike for my birthday when I was a child. It was very meaningful to me because it was my first bike, and I loved riding it around my neighbourhood.

提案: 回答方向明确，但“by”及多次“uh”影响流畅度；建议先说自行车很受欢迎，再用一两个具体原因展开。注意用“bikes are popular”保持主谓一致，用“my country”而不是“my countries”。如果想表达人口多，应说“the population is large”，而不是“people are big”；“路上很拥挤”可说“the roads are crowded”，“骑自行车”可说“riding a bike”。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. The population is large, and the roads in many cities can be very crowded. As a result, cycling is a convenient way to get around, especially for short trips.

× I think I remembered that my mother's give me a bike.

✓ I think I remember that my mother gave me a bike.

这里说的是母亲过去送自行车给“我”，所以 give 应使用过去式 gave。remember 描述现在正在进行的回忆，用一般现在时 remember 更合适。

× It is my birthday present.

✓ It was my birthday present.

这句话描述的是童年时收到的生日礼物，属于过去的事情，因此应将 is 改为过去式 was。

× So I often ride bike nowadays, Yeah.

✓ So I often ride a bike nowadays.

bike 是可数名词单数，前面通常需要冠词。这里应在 bike 前加不定冠词 a。

× I think by, uh, it's very popular in my countries because uh, in my country's, uh, people are very, uh, big and uh, it's very crowded in the road.

✓ I think it's very popular in my country because people are very, uh, big, and it's very crowded on the road.

这里谈论的是学生所在的一个国家，因此应使用单数 country，而不是复数 countries。my country's 也不适合这里的表达；应说 in my country。

× I think by, uh, it's very popular in my countries because uh, in my country's, uh, people are very, uh, big and uh, it's very crowded in the road.

✓ I think it's very popular in my country because people are very, uh, big, and it's very crowded on the road.

表示道路上很拥挤时，通常用介词 on，而不是 in。可以说 on the road。

× So uh, I think, uh, riding bike is very convenient in my country.

✓ So I think riding a bike is very convenient in my country.

bike 是可数名词单数，前面需要冠词。这里应在 bike 前加 a，构成 riding a bike。