Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答没有回应考官关于自行车的问题，而是把“bike”换成了“bag”。请先直接回答是否有自行车，再补充一条具体细节，例如什么时候开始骑、在哪里骑或和谁一起骑。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around the park with my friends.

提案: 回答切题，但有一些用词和语法错误：“banks”应为“bikes”，“bikes”是复数，谓语应使用“are”；表达“家里有自行车”时可说“have a bike”。此外，“old sister”应为“older sister”。建议用一两个具体原因说明自行车为什么受欢迎，并避免重复使用“this”。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially in smaller cities. They’re affordable and convenient for short trips, so many families own one. My older sister and I both have bikes.

× In China banks is very popular, so many people have this in their family.

✓ In China, banks are very popular, so many people have this in their family.

主语“banks”是复数，因此谓语动词应使用“are”，不能使用“is”。

× In China banks is very popular, so many people have this in their family.

✓ In China, banks are very popular, so many people have them in their family.

“this”是单数指示代词，但这里指代复数名词“banks”，应改为复数代词“them”。

× For example, I have this and my old sister have this.

✓ For example, I have them and my old sister have them.

“this”是单数代词，但这里指代前文的复数名词“banks”，应改为“them”。

× For example, I have this and my old sister have this.

✓ For example, I have this and my old sister has this.

主语“my old sister”是第三人称单数，描述现在的情况时，动词“have”应改为“has”。