Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

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会話

Part 1

試験官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

受験者

Yes. When I was a student, I go to school by bike, and when I ride a bike I will feel very free.

試験官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

受験者

I think no, but the electronic bike is very popular in China, so many people both ride that.

評価

総合

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

スコア: 62.0

提案: 回答直接,但时态需要与过去的经历保持一致:把“I go”改为“I went”,并用“felt”描述当时的感受。可以补充一个具体细节,例如骑车上学时的感受或原因。注意“feel very free”可以改为更自然的“feel a sense of freedom”。

例: Yes, I did. I rode my bike to school when I was a child, and I always felt a great sense of freedom on the way.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

スコア: 55.0

提案: 先明确回答普通自行车是否流行,再说明电动自行车的情况,避免“I think no”造成表达含糊。用“electric bikes”代替“the electronic bike”,并把“many people both ride that”改为“many people ride them”。可补充一个具体原因或使用场景,让回答更完整。

例: Traditional bikes aren't as popular as they used to be in China. However, electric bikes are very common because they're convenient for short trips, especially in busy cities.

文法

5: Past tense issue(过去时错误)

× When I was a student, I go to school by bike, and when I ride a bike I will feel very free.

✓ When I was a student, I went to school by bike, and when I rode a bike, I felt very free.

句子描述的是过去学生时期的经历,因此动词应使用过去时:go 应改为 went,ride 应改为 rode,will feel 应改为 felt。讲述过去的习惯或感受时,注意让相关动词保持过去时态一致。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数问题)

× I think no, but the electronic bike is very popular in China, so many people both ride that.

✓ I don't think so, but electric bikes are very popular in China, so many people ride them too.

这里泛指中国常见的电动自行车,应使用复数形式 electric bikes,并搭配 are。泛指一类事物时,通常可以用复数名词,不需要加 the。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× I think no, but the electronic bike is very popular in China, so many people both ride that.

✓ I don't think so, but electric bikes are very popular in China, so many people ride them too.

前文的 electric bikes 是复数,因此后面应使用复数代词 them 指代,不能用指代单数事物的 that。代词的单复数要与它所指代的名词保持一致。

重要語彙

Free— Without charge; Unencumbered by; Vacant; Independent; On the loose
Many— Numerous; A great/good deal of
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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