Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer the question directly rather than repeating it. Add one brief detail about whether you owned a bike and, if relevant, how you used it.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small bike when I was a child, and I often rode it around my neighborhood.

提案: You give relevant reasons, but the response is repetitive and contains unnatural phrases such as “As I stay in India” and “get a easy way.” Say “I live in India,” use “motorcycles” if you mean motorbikes, and connect your reasons clearly. For example, explain that they are easier to maneuver through traffic and more affordable than cars.

例: Yes, motorcycles are very popular in India. Since traffic is often heavy, they’re easier to maneuver through crowded streets than cars. They’re also more affordable, so many people choose them for their daily commute.

× As I stay in India, people usually think of uh, making things easier if they prefer bike more than car because in India we have so much of traffic.

✓ As I live in India, people usually think of making things easier by choosing a bike over a car because we have so much traffic in India.

With the verb prefer, the standard comparison is prefer one thing to another, not prefer one thing more than another. The phrase so much of traffic is also incorrect here; use so much traffic. Live is more natural than stay when describing where you reside permanently.

× So for the bike it is very easy for a person to get a easy way and get out of the traffic.

✓ So, it is very easy for a person on a bike to get out of traffic.

Use an, not a, before the vowel sound at the start of easy. The wording get a easy way is also not grammatical in this context; the corrected sentence expresses the idea directly. Do not use the definite article before traffic when referring to traffic in general.