Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接且提供了具体细节，但时态和句子结构有错误。讲过去的经历时，应把“have”改为“had”；“and that my dad bought me”结构不自然，可改为“which my dad bought for me”。可以补充一个简短细节，例如你骑车的地点或感受，让回答更生动。

例: Yes, I had a small red bike when I was seven. My dad bought it for me, and I loved riding it around our neighborhood.

提案: 你直接表达了观点，也尝试给出理由，但语法错误较多：“a lot of people drive cars”比“there's a lot of people...drive car”更自然；描述日常情况时应使用一般现在时，而不是“didn't see”。“我在街上没看到自行车”不足以证明自行车不流行，建议给出更具体、合理的原因，例如城市交通、通勤习惯或自行车道情况，并删去填充词“um”。

例: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in big cities. Many people commute by car or public transport, and some roads aren’t very bike-friendly.

× Oh yes, I have a small red bike when I was seven years old, and that my dad bought me.

✓ Oh yes, I had a small red bike when I was seven years old, and my dad bought it for me.

这句话讲的是七岁时的经历，属于过去，因此表示“有”的 have 应改为过去式 had。回答过去发生的事情时，要注意动词时态与时间状语 when I was seven years old 保持一致。

× Oh yes, I have a small red bike when I was seven years old, and that my dad bought me.

✓ Oh yes, I had a small red bike when I was seven years old, and my dad bought it for me.

and that my dad bought me 的连接方式不正确：that 不能这样接在 and 后面，而且 bought me 后缺少表示所买物品的宾语。可改为 and my dad bought it for me，意思是“我爸爸给我买了它”。

× No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because there's a lot of people um drive car every day and I didn't see any bikes in the street.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because a lot of people drive cars every day, and I don't see any bikes on the street.

原句中 people 是复数，若使用 there be 句型，应说 there are，而不是 there's。不过这里用 a lot of people drive cars 更简洁自然。注意 there be 句型中的 be 动词要与后面的名词单复数一致。

× No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because there's a lot of people um drive car every day and I didn't see any bikes in the street.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because a lot of people drive cars every day, and I don't see any bikes on the street.

原句把 there's a lot of people 和 drive car 直接连在一起，造成句子结构不完整。表达“很多人每天开车”时，可以直接说 a lot of people drive cars，不需要在 people 前加 there's。

× No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because there's a lot of people um drive car every day and I didn't see any bikes in the street.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because a lot of people drive cars every day, and I don't see any bikes on the street.

这里泛指很多人每天开的汽车，car 应使用复数 cars。谈论一般情况下的一类可数名词时，通常需要使用复数形式，例如 drive cars。

× No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because there's a lot of people um drive car every day and I didn't see any bikes in the street.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because a lot of people drive cars every day, and I don't see any bikes on the street.

学生是在描述自己对本国自行车普及情况的当前看法和日常观察，因此应使用一般现在时。didn't see 是过去时，改为 don't see 更符合这里的语境。