Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接且切题，但内容太短，缺少具体信息。可以补充自行车的颜色、用途，或你小时候骑车的经历，让回答更自然完整。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I often rode it around my neighbourhood with my friends.

提案: 观点明确，也给出了原因，但“always buy bike in sports”表达不自然，且意思不清楚。注意使用复数“bikes”，并把理由说明具体，例如提到通勤、运动或购买自行车的场所。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many children cycle to school, and adults often use bikes for exercise or short trips. You can also find a wide range of bikes in sports shops.

× Yes I think bikes are popular in our country because many children go to school by bike and always buy bike in sports

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because many children go to school by bike and always buy bikes at sports shops.

“Bike”是可数名词，泛指许多孩子购买的自行车时，应使用复数“bikes”。也可以说“buy a bike”，但这里用复数更符合句意。

× Yes I think bikes are popular in our country because many children go to school by bike and always buy bike in sports

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because many children go to school by bike and always buy bikes at sports shops.

表示在商店购买东西时，通常用介词“at”，所以应说“at sports shops”，而不是“in sports”。这里补出“shops”以表达“体育用品商店”的意思。