Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你重复了考官的问题，没有回答是否有自行车。请先直接回答“Yes, I did”或“No, I didn’t”，再补充一两句具体细节，例如几岁开始骑、谁送的，或你常在哪里骑。

例: Yes, I did. My parents bought me a small blue bike when I was about seven, and I used to ride it around our neighborhood with my friends.

提案: 你直接回答了问题，也给出了原因和例子，内容有条理。不过最后一句没有说完，导致表达不完整；“and also”也可以简化为“and”。建议补全公园里的具体情况，并在两三句内收尾。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re affordable and convenient for short trips. Many people also cycle for exercise. For instance, I often see commuters riding bikes in the morning, and parks are usually full of cyclists at weekends.