Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 最初に「Yes, I did.」と質問へ直接答えましょう。「I I」は繰り返さず、「rove」は「rode」に直します。また、「where we play」は不自然なので、「the place where we played」などにし、誰とどこで乗ったのかを具体的に説明すると伝わりやすくなります。

例: Yes, I did. I learned to ride a bike when I was six. I often rode it with my friends in a nearby park, and we usually stayed there until sunset.

提案: 回答が文の途中で終わっているため、理由と具体例を最後まで述べましょう。「use to bike」ではなく、習慣を表す「use bikes」または「ride bikes」を使います。また、「go to company on the school」は「go to work or school」と言い換えると自然です。

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school, especially for short journeys. For example, I often see students cycling to school in the morning.

× For example, I rove the bike where we play until sunset.

✓ For example, I rode the bike where we played until sunset.

The speaker is describing a past experience, so use the past-tense forms rode and played. Rove is not the correct past-tense form of ride, and play should also be changed to played to keep the verb tense consistent.

× Yes, I do, because uh people use to bike when eh people go to company on the school.

✓ Yes, I do, because people ride bikes when they go to work or school.

The answer describes a general present-day habit, so use the present-tense phrase ride bikes. Use to bike is not the correct form here; used to bike refers to a past habit. The correction also uses the present-tense verb go to describe a regular activity.

× Yes, I do, because uh people use to bike when eh people go to company on the school.

✓ Yes, I do, because people ride bikes when they go to work or school.

Use to school, not on the school, when describing travel to school. In this context, go to work is the natural expression for traveling to one's workplace.

× For example, we use bike when

✓ For example, we use bikes when

Bike is a countable noun. When speaking generally about bicycles, use the plural form bikes after we use. The transcript ends mid-sentence, so the rest cannot be corrected without additional context.