Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly using the past tense: “No, I didn’t.” Then add one clear reason or detail. Use “couldn’t afford one” if you mean your family did not have enough money; avoid repeating “but” and check verb forms such as “didn’t have.”

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I really wanted one, but my family couldn’t afford it at the time.

提案: Answer the question about your country, rather than focusing only on your childhood. Your answer contradicts itself by saying bikes were both not popular and pretty popular. Use a complete sentence and support your opinion with a specific group or reason.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among children. They’re an affordable way to get around and a fun way to exercise.

× No I haven't any bike in my childhood but I wanted to buy a bike but my mom didn't are all of.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I wanted to buy one, but my mom didn't allow me to.

The answer refers to childhood, so use the past tense: didn't have, not haven't. After did or didn't, use the base form of the verb. The phrase didn't are is incorrect; assuming you mean your mother did not permit you to buy a bike, say didn't allow me to.

× In my childhood, the bike wasn't that. Not popular. It was pretty popular among children.

✓ In my childhood, the bike wasn't that popular. It was pretty popular among children.

The phrase wasn't that is incomplete because that needs to modify an adjective here, such as popular. Not popular is also a sentence fragment without a subject and verb, so combine it with the preceding clause: wasn't that popular.