Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer directly answers the question, but use “a bike” rather than “any bike” in this negative sentence. To make your response more developed, add a brief, specific reason or detail.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family lived in a busy city, so my parents thought it was safer for me to walk.

提案: The opening gives a clear answer, but the rest of the sentence is difficult to understand. Use a natural phrase such as “a popular choice,” and support your answer with a specific reason or example. Avoid repeating unclear words.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially among young people. They’re an affordable and convenient way to get around, particularly in smaller cities.

× Yes, bikes are popular in our country and boys fast choice maximum boys fast choice are bikes.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in our country, and most boys prefer them.

The phrase 'boys fast choice maximum boys fast choice are bikes' does not form a clear or grammatical clause. Use a complete subject and verb, such as 'most boys prefer them.' This also avoids repeating the unclear phrase.