Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接且语法基本正确。可以补充一两处具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、你骑车的地点，或你当时的感受，让答案更生动；注意控制在五句话以内。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mother gave it to me for my birthday when I was about seven. It was a bright red bike, and I loved riding it around our neighborhood.

提案: 目前句子存在明显的语法和表达问题，“have many people by bike in support because”无法清楚表达意思。可以先直接回答“Bikes are quite popular”，再说明人们骑车的原因，并使用完整句子和连接词，例如“because”连接原因。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or school because they are convenient and affordable. They are also a good way to stay healthy.

× Yes, have many people by bike in support because.

✓ Yes, many people ride bikes because they want to stay healthy.

这里的“have many people”不能用来表达“有很多人”。表达某处“有……”时应使用“There are many people...”；也可以像修改句一样，让“many people”直接作主语。“because”后面还需要接完整的原因从句，不能单独放在句末。