Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接，且提供了和朋友比较骑行速度、车子外观的细节。不过，“compare my bike with my friends”表达不准确，建议改成“compare our bikes”；“who had a nicer design”也可以明确说是车子的设计。可以补充一个具体结果或回忆，让内容更自然、更生动。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it in the park with my friends, and we used to compare our bikes. We would race to see who was faster and talk about whose bike had the coolest design.

提案: 回答了问题，但“very general things”不是表达“很常见”的自然说法，建议使用“very common”或“widely used”；“in every street”可改为“on almost every street”。还可以补充一个具体原因或场景，例如人们用自行车通勤、买菜或锻炼，使回答更充分。

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. You can see them on almost every street, especially in busy city areas. Many people ride them to work or to nearby shops because they are convenient and inexpensive.

× I rode a bike in the park, and I used to compare my bike with my friends.

✓ I rode a bike in the park, and I used to compare my bike with my friends’ bikes.

这里比较的是自行车，而不是“我朋友”这个人，因此比较对象不恰当。应补出 friends’ bikes，表示“我朋友的自行车”。比较两样东西时，要确保比较对象在逻辑上属于同一类别。

× Bikes in my country are very general things, so we can see bikes in every street.

✓ Bikes in my country are very common, so we can see bikes in every street.

general 通常表示“总体的、一般的”，不适合表达自行车“常见”。这里用 common（常见的）更准确。选择形容词时，应确认它表达的含义符合上下文。

× Bikes in my country are very general things, so we can see bikes in every street.

✓ Bikes in my country are very general things, so we can see bikes on every street.

表示某物位于街道上或街道各处，通常用介词 on，而不是 in。因此应说 on every street。可以把街道看作一个表面或路线来记忆这一搭配。