Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答是否有自行车，再说明是谁买的以及你通常如何使用。这里的“when I was here”表达不清楚，如果想说“小时候”，应说“when I was young”或“when I was a child”；也可以删掉“Uh”，并把上学时骑车的信息连成完整句子。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My mom bought it for me, and I often rode it to school.

提案: 回答切题，也给出了价格和便利性两个原因。注意比较时可以说“cheaper than cars”；主语“bikes”是复数，因此后面应使用“they”，而不是“it”。可以补充一个具体用途，例如短途出行或避开交通拥堵，让回答更具体。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they’re cheaper than cars and convenient for short trips. People can ride them to work or to nearby shops, and they’re often a good way to avoid traffic.

× Uh, when I went to school.

✓ I rode it when I went to school.

“When I went to school”是时间状语从句，单独使用时句子不完整。应将它与主句连接，组成完整句子。

× Yes, because bikes are cheaper than the car and more convenient.

✓ Yes, because bikes are cheaper than cars and more convenient.

这里是在泛指自行车和汽车，复数名词“bikes”应与复数名词“cars”进行比较。使用单数“the car”会造成单复数不一致。泛指时可直接使用复数名词，不需要加“the”。

× You can ride it on the road.

✓ You can ride them on the road.

“them”应指代前文复数名词“bikes”。原句使用单数代词“it”，与复数先行词不一致。