Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is difficult to understand because “I have no bike” contradicts “my parents give me a bicycle.” Decide whether you had a bike, then answer directly. Use the past tense (“as a child,” “gave”) and add one relevant detail. For example, say whether you rode it often or where you used it.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle as a child. My parents gave it to me, and I used to ride it around my neighborhood.

提案: Answer directly, then give a clear reason or example. Reduce fillers such as “uh,” use plural forms and correct collocations (“bikes are popular,” “commute to college or work”), and avoid repeating “comfortable.” Your answer should be specific and no longer than five sentences.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in India, especially in smaller towns. Many people use them to get to college or work because they are affordable and convenient.

× I have no bike at my child because my parents give me a bicycle.

✓ I had a bike as a child because my parents gave me a bicycle.

The question asks about the past, so use the past-tense forms had and gave. The original wording also says the speaker had no bike but was given a bicycle, which conflicts in meaning; the correction reflects the likely intended meaning.

× I have no bike at my child because my parents give me a bicycle.

✓ I had a bike as a child because my parents gave me a bicycle.

Use as a child to describe the period when someone was young. At my child is not the correct expression here.

× Yes uh, bike is one of the most uh, popular things in my country because uh, in India, uh, a person like bikes, uh uh, for going college and uh, at work, uh, there is one of the important thing which people can buy for uh, comfortable comfort, comfortable.

✓ Yes, a bike is one of the most popular things in my country because, in India, a person likes bikes for going to college and work. It is one of the important things people can buy for comfort.

Bike is a singular countable noun, so it needs an article in this sentence. Use a bike when referring to one bike in general.

× Yes uh, bike is one of the most uh, popular things in my country because uh, in India, uh, a person like bikes, uh uh, for going college and uh, at work, uh, there is one of the important thing which people can buy for uh, comfortable comfort, comfortable.

✓ Yes, a bike is one of the most popular things in my country because, in India, a person likes bikes for going to college and work. It is one of the important things people can buy for comfort.

A person is a singular subject, so the present-tense verb needs the third-person singular ending: likes, not like.

× Yes uh, bike is one of the most uh, popular things in my country because uh, in India, uh, a person like bikes, uh uh, for going college and uh, at work, uh, there is one of the important thing which people can buy for uh, comfortable comfort, comfortable.

✓ Yes, a bike is one of the most popular things in my country because, in India, a person likes bikes for going to college and work. It is one of the important things people can buy for comfort.

Use to after going when naming a destination: going to college. The preposition is needed to make the phrase grammatically complete.

× Yes uh, bike is one of the most uh, popular things in my country because uh, in India, uh, a person like bikes, uh uh, for going college and uh, at work, uh, there is one of the important thing which people can buy for uh, comfortable comfort, comfortable.

✓ Yes, a bike is one of the most popular things in my country because, in India, a person likes bikes for going to college and work. It is one of the important things people can buy for comfort.

After one of, use a plural noun because the phrase refers to one item from a larger group: one of the important things, not one of the important thing.