Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is contradictory: you first say you did not have a bike, then say you had a bicycle. Decide which meaning you intend and answer directly. Use the past tense (“didn’t have”) and a natural phrase such as “when I was a child.” Add one relevant detail if you can.

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I used it to ride around my neighborhood, especially on weekends.

提案: Answer directly, then give one clear reason and a specific detail. Avoid repeating “because” and “they have their own bike,” and remove fillers such as “uh.” Use consistent present-tense grammar (for example, “people have” rather than “every person had”) and a linking word such as “because” or “for example.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. Many people use them to get to local markets because they’re affordable and easy to park.

× No, I don't have any bike when I was a child, but apart from that I had a bicycle which used ideally.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but I had a bicycle that I used.

The question asks about the past, so use the past-tense form didn't have instead of don't have. Keep the verbs in the answer consistent with that past-time context.

× I don't have any bike

✓ I didn't have a bike

In this sentence, a bike is the natural phrasing for one unspecified countable noun. Use a before the singular count noun bike.

× a bicycle which used ideally

✓ a bicycle that I used

The relative clause needs a subject: I used the bicycle. Without I, the clause is incomplete because used has no stated subject. Ideally is also not a natural description of how someone used a bicycle, so it is omitted.

× every every person had a their own bike

✓ every person has their own bike

The statement describes a general situation in the present, so use has rather than had. The repeated every is unnecessary, and a cannot come before the possessive determiner their.

× a their own bike

✓ their own bike

Do not use the article a before the possessive determiner their. The phrase their own bike is complete without an article.

× they have to go for shopping in the market

✓ they have to go shopping at the market

The usual expression is go shopping, without for. At the market is the natural preposition choice when referring to a place where people shop.