Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答切题，并提到了和朋友周末骑车这一具体细节。注意讲过去的经历时要使用过去时：将“I have”改为“I had”，将“like”改为“liked”。“on the weekends”可以使用，但“at weekends”也很自然。建议补充一个简短的具体场景，让回答更生动。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I loved riding it with my friends at weekends, especially around our neighborhood. It was a fun way to spend time outdoors.

提案: 回答表达了自行车很受欢迎这一观点，但“county”应为“country”。后半部分句子结构不完整，“with one people”表达不清楚；可以说明人们骑车的具体用途，例如通勤或锻炼，并用“Also”连接补充信息。注意使用“older people”和“ride bikes”等正确表达。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work or to run errands because they are convenient and inexpensive. Also, some older people cycle for exercise.

× I have a bike when I was a child and I really like riding it on the weekends with my friends.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child, and I really liked riding it on the weekends with my friends.

这句话描述的是童年时的情况，属于过去时间，因此动词 have 应改为过去式 had，like 也应改为 liked。回答过去经历时，注意相关动词的时态保持一致。

× The majority of people riding quite often

✓ The majority of people ride quite often.

这里的 riding 是现在分词，不能单独充当完整句子的谓语。应使用一般现在时动词 ride 来构成完整的主谓结构。

× with one people

✓ with one person

one 后面应接单数可数名词，因此 people（复数）应改为 person（单数）。可以记住：one person，但 two people。

× like riding bike as a sport

✓ like riding a bike as a sport

bike 是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词。这里可以在 bike 前加不定冠词 a。