Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答问题，再补充一两个具体细节。原回答中“the bag and recycling”意思不清，且“recycling”可能误用了“cycling”；“I also cycling”应改为“I also cycled”。注意使用过去时描述童年经历，并删去重复或无关内容。可以说明骑车的时间、地点以及骑车带来的感受。

例: Yes, I did. I often rode my bike with my mother after school, especially at Central Park. It was a great way to relax after a busy day.

提案: 回答有明确观点，但“people who busy out of work”语法不正确，表达“工作很忙的人”可用“people who are busy with work”。这里的“recycling”应根据语境改为“cycling”或“riding bikes”。请解释汽车为何让骑车不那么普遍，并补充一个具体情况；同时注意句子简洁、语义清楚。

例: Not really. Many people in my country drive because it is more convenient, especially when they have a long commute. As a result, fewer people choose to ride bikes for everyday travel.

× Yeah, definitely, and I have the bag and recycling with my mother every day, for example, umm, I also cycling with my mother, uh, after busy school days to unwind at the Central Park.

✓ Yeah, definitely, and I had the bag and recycling with my mother every day. For example, umm, I also cycled with my mother, uh, after busy school days to unwind at Central Park.

问题问的是小时候的经历，应该使用过去时。将“have”改为“had”；“I also cycling”在这里应改为过去式“ I also cycled”，而不是现在分词形式。回答过去经历时，注意将描述该经历的动词统一使用过去时。

× Yeah, definitely, and I have the bag and recycling with my mother every day, for example, umm, I also cycling with my mother, uh, after busy school days to unwind at the Central Park.

✓ Yeah, definitely, and I had the bag and recycling with my mother every day. For example, umm, I also cycled with my mother, uh, after busy school days to unwind at Central Park.

“Central Park”是公园的专有名称，前面通常不加定冠词“the”。因此应说“at Central Park”。建议记住常见地名的冠词用法，避免在专有名称前随意添加“the”。

× Not really, because nowadays people umm who busy out of work don't have so much time recycling and they also have their own car.

✓ Not really, because nowadays people, umm, who are busy out of work don't have so much time to cycle, and they also have their own car.

关系从句“who busy out of work”缺少谓语动词。这里“busy”是形容词，需要用系动词“are”连接主语“who”和形容词。建议检查从句是否包含完整的主语和谓语。

× Not really, because nowadays people umm who busy out of work don't have so much time recycling and they also have their own car.

✓ Not really, because nowadays people, umm, who are busy out of work don't have so much time to cycle, and they also have their own car.

表达“没有太多时间做某事”时，通常使用“have time to do something”，所以应将“time recycling”改为“time to cycle”。这里的“cycle”符合骑车的语境。建议记住“have time to + 动词原形”这一常见结构。