Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly and use the past tense consistently. You likely mean “bike,” not “bird.” Correct “my dad buy” to “my dad bought,” and say “go cycling” rather than “to playing cycling.” Add a clear detail about how you used the bike.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for my brother and me, and we often rode it at a nearby park.

提案: Give a direct answer, then explain one specific reason. Avoid repeating “in my country” and “ride it.” Use “bike-sharing services” or “shared bikes,” and say “people can use them to get to different places.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Bike-sharing services are widely available, so people can use a shared bike to travel short distances conveniently.

× Yes, I have a bird when I was a child because it's my dad buy it for me and my brother and we usually went to the cycling park to playing cycling.

✓ Yes, I had a bird when I was a child because my dad bought it for me and my brother, and we usually went to the cycling park to go cycling.

The sentence describes a childhood experience, so use the past-tense form had instead of have. The purchase also happened in the past, so use bought instead of buy. Remove it's because it does not form a grammatical clause before my dad bought it.

× Yes, I have a bird when I was a child because it's my dad buy it for me and my brother and we usually went to the cycling park to playing cycling.

✓ Yes, I had a bird when I was a child because my dad bought it for me and my brother, and we usually went to the cycling park to go cycling.

After to used to express purpose, use the base form of a verb, as in to go. The phrase to playing is incorrect. You can say to go cycling or to cycle.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in recently we have some sharing bike in the in my country it's for people can use it to ride it to another place.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because recently we have some bikes for sharing in my country, and people can use them to travel to another place.

Do not use the preposition in before the adverb recently. Say recently, not in recently.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in recently we have some sharing bike in the in my country it's for people can use it to ride it to another place.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because recently we have some bikes for sharing in my country, and people can use them to travel to another place.

Some is used with plural countable nouns, so bike should be plural: bikes. The pronoun referring to the plural noun should also be them, not it.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in recently we have some sharing bike in the in my country it's for people can use it to ride it to another place.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because recently we have some bikes for sharing in my country, and people can use them to travel to another place.

The definite article the is unnecessary before in my country. Use in my country without an article.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because in recently we have some sharing bike in the in my country it's for people can use it to ride it to another place.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because recently we have some bikes for sharing in my country, and people can use them to travel to another place.

The phrase it's for people can use it combines clauses incorrectly. Connect the ideas with and, then use the complete clause people can use them. Avoid repeating the phrase in my country.