Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

練習Part12026-10-24 19:33:14

会話

Part 1

試験官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

受験者

Yes, I actually had a bike when I was a kid, but I never learned how to use it.

試験官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

受験者

Yes, they are popular in my country, but it's not as popular as books are popular in Europe. In my country people usually drive cars and they prefer cars to public transport or bikes and I think it's the reason that the weather is bad.

評価

総合

総合: 5.5流暢さと一貫性: 6.0発音: 5.5文法: 5.5語彙: 5.5

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

スコア: 83.0

提案: Your answer responds directly and sounds natural. To make it more informative, add a specific detail about the bike or why you never learned to ride it. “Learned how to ride it” is more precise than “learned how to use it” in this context.

例: Yes, I had a small blue bike when I was a child, but I never learned how to ride it. I was a little nervous about falling, so I mostly watched my friends cycle.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

スコア: 55.0

提案: Your answer gives a clear opinion and a reason, but the comparison with books in Europe is confusing and does not clearly explain how popular bikes are. Also, “it” should be “they” when referring to bikes, and the final sentence would be clearer if you explained that bad weather discourages people from cycling. Use linking words to connect your points and avoid repeating “popular.”

例: Bikes are fairly popular in my country, especially in smaller towns. However, many people prefer driving because public transport can be inconvenient and the weather is often rainy, which makes cycling less comfortable.

文法

12: Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, they are popular in my country, but it's not as popular as books are popular in Europe.

✓ Yes, they are popular in my country, but they are not as popular as books are in Europe.

The pronoun 'it' is singular, but it refers to 'bikes,' which is plural. Use 'they' to agree with that plural noun. The repeated word 'popular' is unnecessary in the comparison, so it is omitted for a more natural sentence.

重要語彙

Bad— Substandard; Harmful; Unpleasant; Inauspicious; Severe
Popular— Well-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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