Bike— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
Yeah, bikes are actually quite popular in my country. Umm, I think a lot of umm, kids especially ride bikes and all that in this country because we have these age limit on when to, umm, ride vehicles and all that. So yeah.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 70.0提案: Answer directly, but add one specific detail to develop your response, such as when you got the bike, how often you rode it, or where you rode it. Avoid repeating the question's wording.
例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about eight, and I often rode it around my neighborhood with my friends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 54.0提案: Give a clear yes-or-no answer, then explain the popularity with a specific reason or example. Reduce fillers such as “umm” and vague phrases like “and all that.” Clarify whether you mean bicycles or motorcycles, and use the correct phrase “age limits on driving.”
例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country, especially among children. Since people have to reach a certain age before they can drive, many kids use bicycles to get around or have fun with their friends.
文法
× I think a lot of kids especially ride bikes and all that in this country because we have these age limit on when to ride vehicles and all that.
✓ I think a lot of kids especially ride bikes and all that in this country because we have these age limits on when to ride vehicles and all that.
The demonstrative these refers to more than one item, so it must be followed by the plural noun limits, not the singular limit. Use these age limits.
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