Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你直接回答了问题，也说明了父亲给你买车的原因，但时态错误和重复会影响自然度。讲过去的经历时，要统一使用过去时，例如“when I was five”和“my dad wanted”。减少“uh”和重复表达，并可补充一个具体细节，让回答更完整。

例: Yes, I did. I got my own bike when I was five because my dad wanted me to learn how to ride. I remember it was a little red bike.

提案: 你表达了自行车常见的观点，并提到人们骑车通勤，但句子不够连贯，结尾“you can have one”含义不清。注意名词复数和主谓一致：说“ride bikes”和“there are many bikes”。建议先直接回答，再用一两个具体理由或例子展开，并用连接词串联内容。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them to work because they are affordable and convenient, especially in busy cities. There are also public bike-sharing services, so people can easily rent one.

× When I when I'm five years old, I had my own bike, because my dad wants me to learn how to ride a bike.

✓ When I was five years old, I had my own bike because my dad wanted me to learn how to ride a bike.

这句话描述的是童年过去发生的事情，因此要使用过去时。表示年龄时应说“was five years old”，而不是“I'm five years old”；“wants”也应改为过去式“wanted”，与过去的语境保持一致。

× Yes, because on the streets many people ride bike when they uh go to work, go to the company and uh there is many bike on the street you can uh have one

✓ Yes, because many people ride bikes on the streets when they go to work, and there are many bikes on the street; you can have one.

泛指人们骑自行车时，通常用复数“bikes”，不能用单数可数名词“bike”而不加冠词。另外，“many”后面必须接可数名词复数，所以应说“many bikes”。

× Yes, because on the streets many people ride bike when they uh go to work, go to the company and uh there is many bike on the street you can uh have one

✓ Yes, because many people ride bikes on the streets when they go to work, and there are many bikes on the street; you can have one.

“There be”句型中，be动词要与后面的名词保持一致。“many bikes”是复数，因此应使用“there are”，不能使用“there is”。