Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接、内容具体，也说明了骑车带给你的感受。可以把 “when I was 10” 改为更自然的 “when I was ten years old”，并精简句子，让表达更口语、流畅。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was ten years old. My parents gave it to me as a present, and I rode it around my neighborhood every afternoon. I loved the sense of freedom it gave me.

提案: 你直接回答了问题，但后半句语法和意思不清楚。注意使用正确句型，例如 “people of all ages like riding bikes”；另外，补充具体原因，如骑车可以锻炼身体、通勤或节省费用。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. People of all ages ride them because cycling is a convenient way to get around and also provides good exercise. In busy cities, bikes can help people avoid traffic.

× Yes, bikes are popular in my country because no matter what age you are they like take lights, exercise.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country because people of all ages like riding them for transportation and exercise.

“Like”后面可以接动名词（动词-ing形式）或“to do”结构，但不能直接接动词原形，因此不能说“like take”。可以说“like taking”或“like to take”。这里改为“like riding them”，表示“喜欢骑自行车”。