Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly, then give one clear reason or comparison. Use the past tense consistently: say “I didn’t know how to ride” and “my siblings rode.” Add the article in “when I was a child,” avoid repeating “bike,” and remove the repeated “sister.”

例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I didn’t know how to ride one. My siblings had bikes, though, and they often rode them around our neighborhood.

提案: Start with a direct answer and explain the reason without repeating “in my country.” Use “bicycles” if you mean pedal-powered bikes, and say “not everyone can afford a car” rather than “everyone can’t use cars.” Break the long sentence into shorter, connected ideas.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. Cars can be expensive, so many people choose to cycle for short journeys. It’s an affordable way to get around, especially in busy cities.

× Actually no, I didn't have a bike when I was child because I don't know how to ride the bike but my brothers and my sister sister had a bike and they ride the bike correctly.

✓ I was a child

The singular countable noun child needs an article. Use a before child.

× Actually no, I didn't have a bike when I was child because I don't know how to ride the bike but my brothers and my sister sister had a bike and they ride the bike correctly.

✓ I didn't know how to ride a bike, but my brothers and my sister had bikes and rode them well.

The answer describes a situation in the past, so the verbs should also be in the past tense: know becomes knew, and ride becomes rode. Use rode rather than ride to keep the verb tense consistent with had.

× Of course yes, bikes are very popular now in my country because there in my country there are cars are so expensive and everyone can't use cars or motorcycles so they use bikes.

✓ Of course, yes. Bikes are very popular in my country because cars are so expensive, and not everyone can use a car or motorcycle, so people use bikes.

The phrase there are cars are uses two competing sentence patterns: there are + noun and subject + verb. Use the direct pattern cars are so expensive. Also, not everyone can use is clearer than everyone can't use when you mean that some people cannot use cars or motorcycles.