Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 先直接回答过去是否有自行车，因此应使用过去时“had”，而不是现在时“have”。“play bike”不自然，可改为“ride my bike”；注意主谓一致，并避免重复表达“play”。最后一句可说明你通常在哪里骑车、和谁一起骑，使用“where”或“which”连接信息。

例: Yes, I had a fairly large bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my friends in a park near my home. We usually spent our afternoons riding along the paths there.

提案: 先清楚回答自行车现在是否受欢迎，再补充具体原因或用途。题目问的是现在，避免使用含义不清的“last centuries”；如果想谈过去，可说“in the past”。“use bike to walk to school”不自然，可改为“ride bikes to school”。删除重复的“popular”，并补充一个具体场景，例如通勤、上学或短途出行。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially for short journeys. Many students ride them to school, and adults often use them to commute. They’re convenient and inexpensive, particularly in busy cities.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

考官问的是你小时候是否有自行车，问题使用过去时，因此回答中的 have 应改为过去式 had。回答过去的经历时，要确保谓语动词也使用过去时。

× It's a pretty big bike and I love playing bike when I was a child and I love playing with my friend.

✓ It was a pretty big bike, and I loved riding my bike when I was a child. I also loved playing with my friend.

这句话描述的是小时候的情况，所以 It's、I love 应分别改为 It was、I loved。描述过去持续或反复发生的事情时，谓语动词通常使用过去式。

× I love playing bike when I was a child.

✓ I loved riding my bike when I was a child.

英语中表示“骑自行车”通常说 ride a bike，而不是 play a bike。可记住搭配 ride a bike；若要表达“玩自行车”，则需使用 play with a bike，但通常不如 ride a bike 自然。

× Near my home there is a park I always play with there in the park.

✓ There is a park near my home where I always played.

always play 描述的是小时候反复发生的事情，应改为过去式 always played。there is 可以保留，因为公园现在仍可能存在；使用 where 引导地点从句，也能更清楚地表达“我总是在那里玩”。

× I always play with there in the park.

✓ I always played there in the park.

there 已经表示“在那里”，前面不需要再加 with。表达在某处玩可以说 play there 或 play in the park；回忆小时候的事情时，play 应改为 played。

× In our country last centuries most people use bike to walk to study to school and it's popular popular.

✓ In our country in the past, most people used bikes to go to school, and biking was popular.

last centuries 表示过去的时间，因此 use 应改为过去式 used。句中的 it's 也应改为过去式 was，以保持整段回忆的时态一致。回答过去情况时，要注意相关谓语动词都使用过去时。

× Most people use bike.

✓ Most people used bikes.

这里泛指人们通常使用的自行车，应使用复数 bikes；bike 是可数名词，泛指一类事物时通常用复数形式，或使用 a bike。