Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ответьте прямо и уберите сбивающую с толку фразу «was I?». Не нужно повторять, что вы были ребёнком: вопрос уже задаёт этот контекст. Добавьте конкретную деталь, например, где вы катались или как часто.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighbourhood after school.

提案: Исправьте грамматическую ошибку: здесь нужно «very popular», а не «your popular». Дайте прямой ответ и добавьте конкретную причину или пример, например, упомяните поездки на работу или велосипеды напрокат.

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in large cities. Many people use them for short trips because they are convenient and affordable.

× Yes, I had a bike, was I? I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The phrase 'was I?' is incorrectly inserted and does not form a meaningful question in this answer. Connect the ideas with 'when' to explain when you had the bike. Use the past tense to match the question.

× Yes, I think bikes are your popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country.

'Your' is a possessive pronoun and cannot modify the adjective 'popular' here. Use the adverb 'very' to indicate the degree of popularity. Remember that adverbs such as 'very' can modify adjectives.