Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接且切题，但“when I was child”缺少冠词，应说“when I was a child”。答案略短，可以补充一个具体细节，例如自行车的颜色、用途，或你通常在哪里骑，以丰富回答。

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was red, and I often rode it around my neighborhood after school.

提案: 开头直接回答了问题，但后两句表达不够自然且有重复。“fancy about biking”可改为“keen on cycling”或“enjoy cycling”；“Bike shop is popular”也不自然，可具体说明自行车商店常见，或人们骑车的原因。建议用连接词补充一两个具体理由，并注意使用复数“bike shops”。

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people enjoy cycling because it is an affordable way to get around, especially in busy cities. There are also plenty of bike shops in most neighborhoods.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

“child”是单数可数名词，前面需要冠词。这里说的是“我还是个孩子的时候”，应在“child”前加不定冠词“a”。

× Many people ride bikes and they are fancy about biking.

✓ Many people ride bikes, and they are enthusiastic about biking.

“fancy”通常不能用“be fancy about”来表达“喜欢或热衷于”。可以改用“be enthusiastic about”，表示“热衷于”。“about”在这里使用正确。

× Bike shop is popular in my country.

✓ Bike shops are popular in my country.

这里泛指自行车店这一类事物，应使用复数“bike shops”，并与复数主语搭配使用“are”。也可以使用单数形式“a bike shop”，但原句表达的是一般情况，复数更自然。