Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly and explain your reason in clear, complete sentences. Avoid fillers such as “MMM,” and use a natural phrase like “I was afraid of riding a bike.” Your story is relevant, but clarify what happened and finish the sentence. For example, say that your leg got caught in the wheel. Keep the response concise and use past-tense forms consistently.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child because I was afraid of riding one. Once, when I was near a moving bike, my leg got caught in the wheel. After that, I didn’t feel comfortable learning to ride.

提案: Begin with a clear answer, such as “Yes, bikes are quite popular.” Use accurate grammar: say “a good option” and “apps that use bikes.” Explain what you mean by apps—such as bike-sharing services—and complete your final thought instead of ending with “while.” Add one specific detail, such as where people use bikes or why they are convenient.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in busy cities. They’re a convenient and affordable way to get around, and several apps let people rent bikes for short trips. During rush hour, you can often see many bikes on the road.

× I once put my leg inside the tire while the bike was running and it caught my.

✓ I once put my leg inside the tire while the bike was running, and it caught my leg.

The sentence ends with my, a possessive determiner that must be followed by a noun. Add leg to complete the object of caught.

× And also there are a lot of apps that uses bikes in traffic.

✓ And also there are a lot of apps that use bikes in traffic.

There is no article error in this sentence. The actual error is subject-verb agreement: the plural subject apps takes use, not uses.

× And also there are a lot of apps that uses bikes in traffic.

✓ And also there are a lot of apps that use bikes in traffic.

The relative pronoun that refers to the plural noun apps, so the verb must be use rather than uses.

× ...the bike is good option.

✓ ...a bike is a good option.

The singular count noun option needs an article, so use a good option. A bike is also more natural here when referring to bikes generally.

× You can see more bikes than cars while.

✓ You can see more bikes than cars in traffic.

While introduces a dependent clause, but no second clause follows it, leaving the sentence incomplete. Use in traffic to express the intended setting, or complete the thought after while.