Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly with “Yes, I did,” and use “bike” or “bicycle” consistently; “bag” does not fit the question. Use the past tense for the childhood story (“my father bought,” “it took me”) and say “ride my bike” rather than “run back.” Organize your response in a clear sequence: when you got the bike, how learning went, and how you used it. Avoid fillers and aim for a concise, natural answer.

例: Yes, I did. My father bought me a bicycle when I was in fifth grade. I learned to ride it a little later than most of my classmates, so it took me a while to get the hang of it. Once I started high school, I rode it to school every day.

提案: Give a clear answer first: “Yes, bikes are popular.” Use “bikes” or “bicycles,” not “bags,” and replace unclear phrases such as “you can sit back everywhere” and “commute shareable bags” with natural expressions like “cycle around the city” and “bike-sharing services.” Support your opinion with a specific reason, such as convenience or the availability of shared bikes in Beijing. Use linking words and avoid repeating “everywhere.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in China, especially in large cities like Beijing. Bike-sharing services are easy to find, so people can use them for short trips or to get to a subway station. They’re convenient and can help people avoid traffic.

× It did took me a while to learn how to do it.

✓ It did take me a while to learn how to do it.

When did is used to form a past-tense statement, the main verb must be in its base form. Use take, not took, after did.

× Oh, bags is definitely popular in my country.

✓ Oh, bags are definitely popular in my country.

The plural subject bags requires the plural verb are. Match the verb form to the subject’s number.

× I've been just running backs to school every day.

✓ I've been just running back to school every day.

Here, back describes the direction of the movement, so it should not be pluralized as backs. Use back in this expression.