Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

練習Part12026-10-24 01:50:22

会話

Part 1

試験官

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

受験者

Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

試験官

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

受験者

Of course, in China we even have the public bikes.

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総合

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

スコア: 55.0

提案: Use the past tense because the question is about your childhood: say “I had,” not “I do have.” Add one specific detail, such as what you used the bike for or where you rode it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it around my neighborhood after school, and I really enjoyed it.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

スコア: 68.0

提案: Your answer is relevant, but “public bikes” sounds more natural as “shared bikes” or “bike-sharing services.” Add a specific reason or example to explain their popularity.

例: Yes, bikes are very popular in China, especially in big cities. Many people use shared bikes for short trips because they’re convenient and affordable.

文法

5: Past tense issue

× Yes, I do have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

The question asks about a past experience, and 'when I was a child' refers to the past. Use the past-tense auxiliary 'did' instead of the present-tense 'do' to keep the verb tense consistent.

17: Incorrect use of the definite article

× Of course, in China we even have the public bikes.

✓ Of course, in China we even have public bikes.

Use no article before the plural noun 'public bikes' when referring to them generally. The definite article 'the' would suggest that you mean a specific, previously identified group of bikes.

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