Bike— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
受験者
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child and my father bought me a, my first umm bike and it was purple bike and I really loved it and I loved it riding a bike uh, in the past, but uh, I don't like it right now.
試験官
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
受験者
Actually no I don't think so. In my country bikes are not popular, but motorcycle is very popular. Umm, in the past people used to riding a bike but now people don't ride a bike, just mutter.
評価
総合
Part 1
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
スコア: 58.0提案: Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlıyorsunuz ve bisikletinizin rengini, babanızın onu aldığını söyleyerek kişisel ayrıntı veriyorsunuz. Ancak “my father bought me a, my first” ifadesindeki düzeltme ve “I loved it riding a bike” dilbilgisi açısından doğal değil. “My first bike was purple” ve “I loved riding it” gibi kalıplar kullanın. “I loved” ve “I don’t like it” tekrarını azaltıp bisikleti neden artık sevmediğinizi kısaca açıklayın.
例: Yes, I had a bike as a child. My father bought me my first one, and it was purple. I loved riding it around our neighborhood, although I don’t cycle much anymore.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
スコア: 48.0提案: Görüşünüzü açıkça belirtiyorsunuz ve motosikletlerle karşılaştırma yapmanız yararlı. Ancak “motorcycle” ve “bike” için çoğul kullanımı (“motorcycles”, “bikes”), “used to riding” yerine “used to ride” gerekir. Son cümledeki “just mutter” anlaşılır değil; muhtemelen “just ride motorcycles” demek istiyorsunuz. Fikrinizi daha tutarlı kılmak için insanların neden bisiklet yerine motosiklet tercih ettiğine dair kısa ve somut bir neden ekleyin.
例: No, I don’t think bicycles are very popular in my country. Motorcycles are much more common because they’re a convenient way to travel. People used to ride bicycles more often, but nowadays many prefer motorbikes.
文法
× It was purple bike.
✓ It was a purple bike.
A singular countable noun such as bike needs an article. Use a before purple bike.
× I loved it riding a bike.
✓ I loved riding a bike.
After loved, use the -ing form riding to describe an activity. Do not include it before the gerund in this sentence.
× In my country bikes are not popular, but motorcycle is very popular.
✓ In my country, bikes are not popular, but motorcycles are very popular.
Motorcycle refers to a category of vehicles in this general statement, so use the plural form motorcycles. The verb must also agree with the plural subject: are.
× In the past people used to riding a bike.
✓ In the past, people used to ride a bike.
Used to, when describing a past habit, is followed by the base form of the verb, not the -ing form. Use ride, not riding.
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