Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer responds directly and is grammatically correct, but it simply repeats the question and does not develop your response. Add one or two specific details, such as what you used the bike for or how you felt about it.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood with my friends, especially on weekends.

提案: You give a clear general opinion, but the answer has repeated words and awkward phrasing. Use the plural "bikes," say "for their daily commute," and organize the examples in a clear sentence. You could also add a specific reason or observation.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people ride them for their daily commute or to get to college and tuition classes. They are convenient, especially for short trips.

× I think yeah, bike is common in my country.

✓ I think so; bikes are common in my country.

When referring to bicycles in general, use the plural noun bikes. The plural subject also requires the plural verb are. Use I think so for a more natural response.

× Lots of people use it in everyday commute

✓ Lots of people use bikes for their daily commute.

Use for to express the purpose of using a bicycle. In this context, in does not fit naturally with commute.

× Lots of people use it in everyday commute

✓ Lots of people use bikes for their daily commute.

The singular countable noun commute needs a determiner. Their supplies one, making the phrase their daily commute grammatical.

× and and they and for college or tuition or everything they use bike.

✓ They also use bikes to get to college, attend tutoring, and go to other places.

The original clause has repeated conjunctions and an incomplete, confusing structure. Use a clear subject and verb, then list the purposes in a parallel form.

× they use bike

✓ they use bikes

Use the plural bikes when speaking generally about bicycles, rather than the singular countable noun bike without a determiner.