Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer directly with “No, I didn’t.” Use “when I was a child” rather than “in child,” and say your parents “didn’t buy me a bike” rather than “did not purchase for me.” Add one relevant detail, such as how you got around or whether you wanted a bike.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents couldn’t afford one. I usually walked to nearby places, although I sometimes wished I could ride a bike with my friends.

提案: Give a clear opinion first: “Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country.” Use “bikes” instead of “Mike,” and avoid “powerful” and “go for suffering,” which do not fit this context. Explain specifically who uses bikes and why, using a linking word such as “because.”

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities. Many people use them to commute or run errands because they are affordable and convenient in traffic. Some people also ride them for exercise or during their free time.

× No one.

✓ No, I didn't.

The question asks about a past situation, so a complete answer should use the past-tense auxiliary did. Use No, I didn't to mean that you did not have a bike.

× I was in child that time.

✓ I was a child at that time.

Child is a singular countable noun and needs an article. Use a child.

× I was in child that time.

✓ I was a child at that time.

Use at that time to refer to a particular point or period in the past. In that time is not the natural preposition in this sentence.

× I have no bike because my parents did not purchase for me.

✓ I had no bike because my parents did not purchase one for me.

The answer refers to the past, so use had rather than have. The auxiliary did not already correctly marks the past tense of purchase.

× I have no bike because my parents did not purchase for me.

✓ I had no bike because my parents did not purchase one for me.

Purchase normally needs an object in this sentence. Add one to indicate what the parents did not purchase. You can also say purchase a bike for me.

× So best way to go on the bike.

✓ So bikes are the best way to get around.

The original is a sentence fragment because it has no main verb. Add a subject and a verb, such as bikes are, to make it a complete sentence.